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No settling down

review by Cassandra Atherton and Paul Hetherington


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John Kinsella
Graphology Poems 1995-2015
Five Islands Press, Parkville VIC 2016
Limited edition three-volume set
ISBN 9780734051639
ISBN 9780734051646
ISBN 9780734051653
Pb 268pp / 281pp / 246pp AUD74.95


1 The act of writing poetry

For some poets the act of writing poetry is almost all to do with producing polished and finished works, and such poets often write relatively few poems. For example, almost every one of Kenneth Slessor’s one hundred or so poems are conspicuously ‘made’ things, crafted and polished as individual works that stand alone in their own poetic space, reflecting a particular, disciplined poetic sensibility. Other poets may produce such polished works but are as much, or more, concerned with poetry as an ongoing inquiry into and investigation of the resources of language and the ways language constructs and construes meaning.

John Kinsella is one such poet – prolific, restless, frequently returning to preoccupations about the environment and the consequences of its degradation and, in doing so, writing a discontinuous poetic chronicle of his experiences in Western Australia’s Avon Valley. He is also often focused outwards on international concerns and issues, and on personal and public ethics, and is a traveller who writes about places he visits. In these ways he is powerfully engaged in his poetry with both the quotidian and the abstract.

Yet Kinsella also has another major preoccupation, and that is a continuing investigation of the language of the contemporary lyric, particularly as it manifests in various versions of the contemporary pastoral. This is a tradition that he has to some extent re-fashioned in his own, sometimes idiosyncratic image, frequently writing what Marthe Reed, following Rob Wilson, terms ‘anti-pastoral’ poetry. In applying this term to Kinsella’s poetry, she states that his ‘dark vision of place recognizes in agriculture, as it has been practiced in Western Australia, nothing of the European idyll of Arcadian happiness’ (Reed 2010: 92).

One interpretation of his complete oeuvre is as a questing exploration and a testing of what contemporary poetry might say in extremis – particularly in the face of environmental crisis – and how language might be adapted, and even pulled and stressed, in order to say it. The three-volume publication, Graphology Poems: 1995-2015 foregrounds this enterprise more clearly than any other volume Kinsella has published.

This extended and occasionally sprawling group of poems is explicitly and self-consciously about language, the writing of poetry, and about what poetic gestures may look like as inscriptions of being, self and experience if examined from the perspective of a poet who has made of himself a forensic identity:

Graphology: Forgery Five

I can’t write outside locality
and inside I’m stuck for words.
I can’t connect with the bush telegraph,
though whispers fall where leaves
have already dried and powdered. (vol 3: 196)

In other words, among other things, this book is a way of Kinsella putting his poetic craft under a scrutinising gaze, and asking ‘what do I see here?’ In the hands of a less wide-ranging writer such an enterprise might be largely solipsistic, yet Kinsella’s work justifies this extended excursion into linguistic self-analysis because he finds in his examination of his own task as a poet issues of broad interest, turning this enterprise and its attendant preoccupations outwards.

What are these issues? Impossible to fully summarise across the vast tracts of these three volumes, they are mostly about Kinsella’s repetitive probing of what one might name as an environment-self-language nexus. And they are about politics and social injustice as poetry might understand it – that is, as a restless articulation of contemporary political and social absurdities, strangenesses and injustices perceived through the lens of a writer who refuses to identify with the mainstream and yet has, with a keen sense of irony, contradiction and multiplicity invoked for his own purposes many of its tropes and issues. Such poetry can, at times, be uncompromisingly blunt, and that is the purpose of some of it – to speak directly about what Kinsella believes urgently needs to be said.

Kinsella’s concerns are also about marshalling a sense of the world’s never-containable, protean indeterminacies, channelling them into what one might call the real-unreal of poetic utterance; an utterance that, in Kinsella’s hands is always trying to address large and small things at once, but which knows there is no settling down, never the opportunity for conclusion, and not much that is even temporarily fixed and stable. Nevertheless, the restless inquiry of these volumes states that some things have a continuing importance – that language offers the possibility of a sustained and salutary self-inquisition; and that abstractions garner much of their life from the development of a restless personal ethics centred on inquiry into and speaking about contemporary values and mores. In this last sense, Kinsella has defined himself as a public poet.


2 Speaking out

In an interview with Harold Bloom about Australian poetry for In So Many Words (2013), Bloom stated that it was very good ‘[f]or Australia to have had Judith Wright, Alec Hope, Les Murray (who can be a very difficult personality – we have had our moments, but still he is a very powerful poet) and John Kinsella’ (11). Indeed, Bloom wrote the introduction to Kinsella’s Peripheral Light: Selected and New Poems (2004), which includes references to similarities between Ashbery’s work and Kinsella’s. Certainly Kinsella shares Ashbery’s interest in longer forms and Graphology is a project that ramifies to such an extent that it even extends beyond the confines of these three volumes – indeed, Kinsella has described it as ‘the long poem that one writes over a lifetime’ (Kinsella nd). While it began in the late 1980s, the first publication of Graphology dates back to 1997 when an eponymous booklet was published by Equipage (Cambridge); the second part to The Radnoti Poems (1996). Since then, poems from this project have been published in a wide range of print and online journals and books. Many are collected in this three-volume set.

However, in a note reminiscent of ‘The Hunting of the Snark’ that precedes the contents page, Kinsella states: ‘Some [Graphology poems] are in other books presently in print (often without their Graphology attributions and titles), while others remain (hand-written) in journals and notebooks. Others are difficult to locate.’ Furthermore, there are three poem essays, or poem notes, that self-reflexively discuss the Graphology project and precede the poems in the first volume. In ‘A Short Note on Graphology’, Kinsella makes the point that ‘the pieces were often composed in a sequential and chronological format, numbered accordingly, though at times the numbering has leapt and reversed and become – seemingly – inconsistent’ (1: 13).

In this way, resistance to closure is important to a reading of this behemoth of a poem (or sprawl of poem-parts). Scholar Nic Birns in his essay on Graphology has described it as ‘a vast dilating rhizome’ (Birns 2016). Indeed, while the poems in Graphology are numbered, they challenge any notion of genesis and chronology. The project’s inbetweenness emphasises a kind of nomadism, where the reader becomes a wanderer in something non-linear and non-hierarchical.

Of course, graphology is both the study of handwriting, especially when it is regarded as an expression of the writer’s character, and in linguistics it is the study of systems of writing like grammatology. Kinsella refers to graphology as both ‘pseudo-science’ and ‘alchemy’; a kind of ‘fortune telling’ (1: 11). These definitions are essential to any understanding of Kinsella’s poems in this collection. Graphology is about what is false and subversive, just as much as it is about truth. Its use of space and of typography is important to its ruminations on mapping the land and the merging of landscapes; about what is constructed, made, forged (in a number of senses of that word) and destroyed. While much of the text is printed, there are moments when the typography is replaced by handwriting or something hand-drawn, as in volume one’s ‘Graphology: Canto 10’, where the poem moves from palatino font, to what we imagine may be Kinsella’s own handwriting – which he earlier states is ‘almost illegible’ (1: 11). In such instances, the poem becomes an enactment of the urge to inscribe, and the promise in the title of being able to read certain significances in the writing of another is almost offered up:

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A kind of subordination is clear from the reference to the postscript and in the use of ‘as hypotactic’ as the first handwritten words in this poem; there is often something beneath the words, a play that is constructed as a palimpsest. This is even more obvious in volume two, where the handwriting becomes more freehand and focused on land patterns. The cursive writing grows into loops and lines, moving into computer-generated or interpreted lines. Most dramatically, in ‘Claimant Triptych’, the curve of cursive writing becomes a comment not only on borders, but a ‘recognition halo: orbit,/ help when weather has damaged’ (2: 31). It is perhaps even the personification of global warming:

head of state says global warming will be superior
for Western Australia: massive
opportunity massive (2: 31)

Again, what lies beneath is important. The scribble – as it first appears – is another reference to overwriting and fakery; a comment on signatures as a form of security. It is almost a parody of signature:

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In volume three, there are no handwritten moments, perhaps suggesting that handwriting is a dying art, as writers so often compose on computers and as signatures become digital. In his book, Disclosed Poetics: Beyond Landscape and Lyricism (2007), Kinsella states:

The signature, written by hand, is a false fingerprint – it is a construct. And this is the clue to decoding the work as it unravels. It is also a poem concerned with issues of belonging, ownership and recording identity. (Kinsella 2007: np)

This gestures to Graphology’s exploration of the unreliability of memory and its inconsistency. In this way, the poems in Graphology point to the inauthentic, which exists as part of the veritable. Indeed, Kinsella suggests this infallibility can lead to false memories and, by extension, false identities. This, in turn, posits questions about Kinsella’s obiter dicta and public persona concerning Graphology. He has discussed the project in interviews, blogs and books. Could he be providing the reader with the key and yet simultaneously gesturing away them away from it, in a Carrollian effort to encourage the reader to find their own meaning? Indeed, it is the subversive quality of the long poem, its illusive shifting sand, that helps make reading it a biotic interaction.

In this light it is interesting to consider the opening of the first of the ekphrastic poems in the sequence ‘Graphological Six Poems After Six Paintings by Karl Wiebke’:

Your subject is our field to tackle.
Your paint is our landscape: hewn
as dune and outcrops, discharges
and fertilisations. Gross and fine.
Not aerial necessarily. We travel
or transit or climb or wrestle
from left to right, head to toe,
and in reverse. Verso unto recto.
Vice versa. (2: 34)

Kinsella might almost be talking about his own work rather than Wiebke’s, and offering a challenge to his readers to ‘tackle’ his poetry as their own ‘field’ and ‘landscape’. Such an invitation represents a dual impulse of invitation and resistance and it lies at the heart of these three volumes of poems and their interconnectedness – and it gives this long poem, at least, a notional cohesiveness. While Graphology includes runs of sequences (short and long sequences titled, for example, ‘Holograph’, ‘Un-numbered’, ‘Faith’, ‘Icon’, ‘Heuristics’ and even ‘Cambridge Psychedelia’), there are no clear beginnings and endings; indeed many poems are untitled and form their own silent sequence(s). Kinsella is exploring ways in which the oppositional is concatenated. In this way, pessimism about the environment manifests itself in hope for the future. While many reviewers choose the more overtly political poems to explicate, two poems that are quietly optimistic and demonstrate Kinsella’s private nature in the construction of a public identity, are ‘Graphology 4247: A True Dream Recounted’ and the final poem in volume three, ‘Graphology Mutations 27’.

In ‘Graphology 4247…’ Kinsella italicises the word ‘True’ in the title of the poem to question and ironise the veracity of his re-telling. Such a gesture signals his awareness that all stories are bound up in interpretation and are potentially problematised by the individual’s shifting perspectives. A dream narrative is even more unreliable because it is born in sleep and the unconscious and, what is more, because this is a poem it may not even be true. In the poem itself, Kinsella addresses his personal choice not to fly, in an amusing vision of silence where an airline is ‘designed for readers of Shakespeare quartos, / or, at a stretch, folios’:

I dreamt a travel agent
tried to convince me to fly
again: the lure or allure
was an airline specialising
in transatlantic silence:
flights designed for readers
of Shakespeare quartos,
or, at a stretch, folios:
delectable silence at altitude,
with the ocean and attendant
tempests far below: floating
above the viscera of drama,
the earthiness plights plots
and language are filched from.
Come fly, fly with us:
dreamliners, prompters
of eternal tomorrows. (2: 266)

Importantly, the narrator in this poem manages to be above earthly problems and drama yet entirely invested in them; just as one might argue that the reader of Shakespeare’s quartos or folios is perhaps bookish and yet common in the way ‘plight plots / and language are filched from’ his plays. This is underscored by Kinsella’s referencing of The Tempest in this poem and also Macbeth in the ‘eternal tomorrows’ and perhaps even Banquo in the repetition of ‘fly’.

Just as Fleance is urged to fly from treachery, Kinsella is flying above the treachery of humans as custodians of the land. In this way, Kinsella’s public persona is built on private moments and scattered intertextual poetic references. This is particularly evident in ‘Graphology Mutations 27’, where Kinsella’s son and partner are referenced against a backdrop of music from Heidenröslein and the ‘tearing and grinding’ of the ‘heavy machinery’ wreaking destruction on the valley:

As heavy machinery eats away at the valley
I hear a beautiful voice raise to a high G

as Tim sings Schubert’s setting of Goethe’s
poem on young love, ‘Heidenröslein.’ Tracy

has given him the German as part of his lesson
and recalling the tune precisely from his iPod

though he hasn’t heard it for months, he sings
over the tearing and grinding of the digger –

rosebud and thorn, the reachable beauty
staying unreachable in a damaged world.

I am stunned by the guileless weaving
of a future that will entice and hurt,

by what I miss transfixed at the fall of a tree
as heavy machinery eats away at the valley. (3: 246)

Where ‘Graphology 4247…’ ends on the promise of ‘eternal tomorrows’ with the narrator floating dream-like in his / her Dreamliner, the narrator of ‘Graphology Mutations 27’ describes the ‘future’ as one of ‘entice and hurt’. The huge mouth of ‘machinery eat[ing] away at the valley’ is a dark parody of Tim singing a ‘high G’ as the rhyming couplet and midline rhyme of ‘tree’, ‘valley’ and ‘machinery’ ends in its own music. Indeed, the use of Heidenröslein as an intertext also references what Kinsella has described in his poetic essay, ‘Points of Modulation’, as the music that holds these poems together: ‘The shifts between poems are equivalent to pivot chord modulations in music’ (1: 14). This underscores Kinsella’s belief that ‘Letters of protest are also ways of saying thanks. To protest against the destruction of bushland is to affirm the necessity or sanctity of that bushland…’ (1: 14). It is the eternal tension between the ‘rosebud and thorn’.


3 Poetry as a porous form of activisim

Kinsella’s reputation extends beyond poetry to his blog with Tracy Ryan, ‘Mutually Said: Poets Vegan Anarchist Pacifist’. He is also present on YouTube, such as when he reads his ‘Bulldozer’ poem [1]. In Poetry and Activism Undammed Gary Snyder argues, ‘poetry is a form of activism. If you write things down that go out into the community, they will affect change’ (Snyder 2012: np). Writer and scholar Louis (Luke) Menand, who has been labelled a public intellectual but eschews the title, argues that it is more than this. He believes a poet who is identifiable as a public intellectual needs to write with activism in mind; it is not enough for poems to be interpreted as activist by a reader. And perhaps the most famous public intellectual, Noam Chomsky, argues that the cliché of the public intellectual ‘speaking truth to power’ is a pious phrase that conceals truth. He believes that it is people who are oppressed by those in power – not those in positions of power – who need the truth. He divides public intellectuals into two distinct categories: conformist public intellectuals and dissident ones. For Chomsky, the dissident public intellectuals are important precisely for their dissension (Atherton 2014: 128).

Kinsella may be identified as a dissident poet public intellectual for his activist poetry. He states:

When I write an ‘activist poem’, I want it to be misinterpreted as much as interpreted; I want even something that seems overt to be questionable – at least through that basic and fallible device: irony … the writing of poems becomes part of a mantra of witness and empowerment. (Kinsella 2010: 3)

Poetic activism of this kind is in a variety of ways porous. It steps out into the quotidian world to encounter the occasions it addresses and to register its protests, and it simultaneously steps back into the poetic, which is always partly about the action of language. As it does so it brings a highly constructed language into the realm of public debate, and takes back into the poetic the grit and noise of the activist’s engagements. As a result, poetic structures made in the crucible of activism are often neither entirely ‘poetic’ in the conventional sense, nor entirely ‘activist’ in the sense of campaigning for direct and immediate change (although some of Kinsella’s poetry does do this). Rather, many of these poems exist as both public statements and private accounts of what Kinsella calls ‘witness’, but which might equally be understood in this context as an urge to see and make known.

The result is poems of great diversity, some of which sit a little uncomfortably on the page, seeming to want to stand more immediately in the public space at which their considerable energy is directed. Others are more obviously ‘poetic’, yet even such poems are capable of questioning the usefulness of making ‘text’:

Graphology Relapse 37

Window is empty:
show restraint
and kept text
out of it. (3: 87)

Overall, Graphology speaks to Kinsella’s preoccupation with finding something of the poetic almost everywhere he looks, and with making his transformations of language speak of as many different kinds of experiences as he can. This book suggests that acting and speaking are inseparable, and that saying is, in itself, an important part of doing. Further, if some of the ‘saying’ in these three volumes challenges the artificiality and limitations of conventional language use, other poems make fairly conventional use of language but use it to challenge the world that the poems address. Still other poems remember – sometimes in strange and ambiguous ways – the powerful and ancient lyric tradition that, in its own ways, continues to inform so much contemporary poetry even in the skeptical twenty-first century:

Graphology Heuristics 13

Cloth ear hangs on clothesline.
Hung out to dry. Smokey, hazy day.
A mirror of itself. Hear it.
Hear it gossiping.
Swish. Swish.
A field.
A bird.
A fish. (3: 111)

There is something simultaneously plain-speaking, lyrical and rather surreal about this short work, and such mixed tropes characterise much of what Kinsella attempts. In Graphology we are able to read him (reading himself) as lyrical, anti-lyrical, polemical, questioning, observant, quizzical, philosophical, critical and ironic, all at once. This may be what is most significant about the Graphology project in the end – its ramifying openness and the interconnecting complexities of its sometimes riddling texts. Often the spaces of these poems open out to reveal absences or to imply other texts that are (as far as we know) yet to be articulated. In this volume it is the sum of the incomplete parts that implies a greater whole.

It may partly have been Kinsella’s reputation as a poet public intellectual that made the publication of this limited edition three-volume set of poetry possible: he is one of perhaps two or three Australian poets with an established international reputation. With more than 740 Graphology poems collected from at least 4700 poems in a three-volume ‘limited’ edition, it has not been produced for a broad readership. However, Graphology asks a small group of dedicated readers and writers of poetry to think intelligently and politically about the world and about language and to lobby, even in small ways, to enact change.




Works cited



Cassandra Atherton is an award-winning writer, academic and scholar. She was a Harvard Visiting Scholar, sponsored by Stephen Greenblatt, in 2016 and was a Visiting Fellow at Sophia University, Tokyo in 2014. She has published eight books (with two more in progress) and is the successful recipient of more than fifteen national and international grants and teaching awards, including an Australia Council Grant and a VicArts grant. Her most recent books of prose poetry are Trace (Finlay Lloyd) and Exhumed (Grand Parade).

Paul Hetherington is Professor of Writing at the University of Canberra and head of the International Poetry Studies Institute (IPSI). He has published eleven full-length collections of poetry, including the recently released Burnt Umber (UWA Publishing 2016) and Gallery of Antique Art (Recent Work Press 2016) and five chapbooks. He won the 2014 Western Australian Premier’s Book Awards (poetry), was shortlisted for the 2013 Montreal International Poetry Prize and commended in the 2016 Newcastle Poetry Prize. He was also recently shortlisted for the international 2016 Periplum Book Competition (UK).


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Vol 21 No 1 April 2017
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